lol, WTG Flail +1 =D

Honestly, I haven't a clue about all the comas, sema colons and whatnot. I just noticed a bunch of spelling errors and thought I might bring them to your attention.

Tsk tsk, you got a couple grammical errors in there Ava. If not for those then it would be perfect! So you get an B- lol =p

Alas! The GMs have filtered my attempt to bypass the filter lmao!   Keep 'em comin' Ava! The plot just keeps getting thicker and the more you read the more you must have. =)

OMG! What a [filtered] of a berserk! Using shock shield and PED! Can't wait to find out what happens next. =)   lol [edi ted by gm] is filtered. =X

Exquisite addition to an already fantastic story.   Well done, Ava. =)

Hes just waitin' for you to make a move for his nuts. . . .

Splendid job as usual Ava! Absolutely magnificent!   Cannot wait until the next one. =)

Maybe if we ask her nicely and say please Ava will put up some more to satisfy our cravings for her stories for awhile. =D   More Please Ava!!! =D

Yes, most wouldn't care Ava but it'll be those few that do actually care that make all the difference. So count me in with whatever you need help with. =)   And sorry I haven't been keeping up with your story what with school and all.